the past has places memory can’t reach,
where time’s own passing draws a veil across
unfolding scenes: in time, each quiet loss
leaves stains that even age can’t bleach –
the past has places memory can’t reach,
and in recalling times long past the gloss
on time is like a stone’s long-gathered moss…
yet there are things imaginations teach;
where memory obfuscates the truth, the mind
will grow a little younger in the calling
of a purer age once sadly left behind,
and in the slow refilling of the space
with memories, the volatile rephrase
of madness and a fatal skyward falling
I like. That was so… resigned. Loss. Tragedy. Beauty.
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…really? I thought this was bad…
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it isn’t.
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oh! you came in second for both prose and poetry – congrats 😀
and gmail shows your comment like this:
melodily – LJ Comment to me
show details 08:06 (-467 minutes ago)
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huh how did you know, you asked? haha what did you get? anyway all that effort for nothing too, they not counting winning entry points for BW ): because the BW IHC comm got some J1s to help them submit entries. sniff. and what hapen to gmail, 467 minutes ago whoa
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gan told me! my secks scene got first for prose 😀 the only thing i submitted hahaha. WG’ll solicit permission from authors and then we’ll see our stuff published online yayy
and gmail damn weird tonight, keep hanging on me
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congrats hahaha austin was delighted by it 😀 and i was the one who suggested to austin that they should publish winning entries online yay
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ah so of course we know he is a horny person :p
and its not 467 minutes, just now was around 11 and gmail said 8 am the next day! so its negative.
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Hey Thomas, congrats in advance >D
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what?
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PROSE
Top 3:
1. Thomas Ang – Snapshots (MT)
2. Lee Zhi Xin – At night they come alive (BW)
3. Gabriel Tan – Traveling (BB)
The announcement should come up tomorrow!
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which gabriel tan?
And do you have a copy of zhixin’s? I wanna see!
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Once the results are released formally and we get permissions from the authors, we will be showcasing the winning pieces online 🙂
Zhixin put up quite a good show; she also won second place for poetry!
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